Thursday, July 24, 2008
Afternoon all…it’s a glorious day and the first draft of Mechanicum has been handed to the grasping claws of the BL’s editor servitors. It’s been a long road, but I finally got it done. I won’t bore you with the how and why of it took so long, but it’s done now and I’m very happy with it. It’s not quite the book I intended to write when I started out, but I think it’s all the better for that, as it took quite different directions along the way, none of which I expected. Which brings me neatly to one of the first things I want to talk about. Expectation.

Expectation can be a blessing and a curse for those of a creative bent. On the one hand, it generates excitement and interest in what you’re writing/recording/filming so that people rush out and buy it and (hopefully) enjoy it. It becomes a curse when the person who’s read your book, listened to your album or watched your film feels that it wasn’t what they expected. Now, does that mean your endeavour was wasted? Certainly not, just because something isn’t what a person expected doesn’t make it bad, it just makes it…unexpected. Remember the vast expectation every Star Wars fan had going into their first viewing of The Phantom Menace and how, two hours later, they all marched from the cinema ready to burn George Lucas? Well, frankly, there was no way any film was going to live up to our expectation after so long, but watch it again in the cold light of hindsight and you find lots to like about it. It’s still not a particularly good film by any stretch of the imagination, but, having seen all three prequels now, it kinda works in the context it was meant to.

To look at how expectation can be manipulated, just look at the poster and trailer for the movie ‘Reign of Fire’. I remember a crowd of us GW types frothing with excitement at the prospect of this film. Dragons! Attack Helicopters! Tank! Dragons battling Attack Helicopters above the skies of London as Mankind fights for survival against a malevolent Draconic foe! Now, if you’ve seen the movie, you’ll know that’s not what it’s about at all… The war of the Dragons versus the Humans happens via newspaper headlines and a voiceover and the bulk of the movie is set in the aftermath of that war. Which, when you consider what we were expecting, is a hell of a letdown. We all left the cinema feeling slightly hoodwinked and thinking the film was terrible. Having seen it recently on the telly, I actually really enjoyed it. Again, not a film that was ever going to trouble the Oscars, but a pretty decent action movie. With Dragons.

In terms that mean anything to us BL fans, I think the same happened with the Horus Heresy novel, Descent of Angels. People bought and read that book with the expectation of it advancing the storyline and telling of the Dark Angels in the time of Horus’s betrayal. That wasn’t what they got and I remember reading posts deriding the book, which I thought a tad unfair to say the least, since most people’s criticism of the book was that it didn’t match a their expectations of what they thought it should have done. So, their expectations weren’t met, but does that mean that Descent of Angels is a bad book? Of course not. As the dust settles and those with the loudest voices go away, most people pick up the book and enjoy it, realising that it tells a piece of the Dark Angels history that needs to be told before the main event after the Heresy occurs. They also saw that the Horus Heresy isn’t just about always moving forward (though it needs to do that too), it’s about exploring the setting and telling tales of the people caught up in those momentous times.

On a personal level, I’m about to embark on a Heresy-era short story called The Last Church, which will see the light of day in the Tales of Heresy anthology. It certainly doesn’t advance the storyline and is takes place before the Great Crusade sets out from Terra. Having seen two-line précis for the other stories in the book, I wanted to do something different and unexpected so that when people read it they’d be surprised and have to perhaps shift a mental gear or two. I think it’s a good thing for readers and writers alike to challenge themselves by reading and writing things that are different from their usual fare. I’ve said before that it’s easy to mistake a rut for a groove, so every now and then we ought to break out of our comfort zone and do something that challenges us or takes us to places we weren’t expecting.

I think this applies to most things, be they books, movies, films, records…whatever. Too often we’re quick to criticise things when we haven’t heard, read or seen anything of them. It never ceases to amaze me how quick and eager some people are to assume that something’s going to be shit before it’s even been released (or in some cases, even made…). In the case of movies, Hollywood had previous when it comes to stuffing up what look like great ideas on paper (I’m looking at you Pathfinder! How hard could it be…? Indians versus Vikings, it should have been a slam-dunk, but oh how it disappointed…) but let’s not be so keen to deride things or to jump on the bandwagon of sneering.

I think a lot of it comes from the internet breeding a sense of inferiority in people, making them afraid to say they like something for fear of reprisals from the more frequent posters who look down on them and argue in largely pointless ways. It’s often seen as the done thing to criticise creative endeavours, because if someone hates Thing X, but you quite liked Thing X, you often find yourself thinking that maybe this person is cleverer than I am and knows more than I do, I’d better agree with him… Stop! Stop, I say! Stick to your guns, defend your point of view and don’t be too quick to abandon it, just because the person saying you’re wrong has a high post count. Just because some people post a lot on the net, this – contrary to their own deluded belief – does not give them some enlightened, god-like status, where everything they say comes loaded with gravitas and wisdom. One person’s post is just as valid as another’s and this assumption of status based on their post count is nonsense. Of course, none of this is meant to stop reasoned debate and constructive criticism, far from it, such things are the lifeblood of any creative type, but the keywords here are ‘reasoned’ and ‘constructive’. If a thing is bad, there’s nothing wrong with saying so, as long as you say why.

Anyway, enough of my rants on the net. I like the net and if everyone behaved with common decency and played nice then it would be a wonderful place, where ideas and constructive discussions were held, but we all know that’s not the case. I live in hope that one day folk will realise that there’s really no need to be unpleasant just because you can’t see the person you’re insulting. I’m an optimist, I know.

Right. On to Answers to Poster’s Questions:

Gildor: Thank you very much…it was a good finish line to cross. And, yeah, Mechanicum Momentum should have been a title of one of the sub-sections in the book…

Xhalax (1): So just read the Killing Ground, then it’ll stop tormenting you. Hope you liked the audio book and I agree, more of the same please. And, unabridged, definitely, why would anyone not want to read the full story in a book. It’d be like watching the highlights of a movie.

Alexander: Nice one, and I’m glad you enjoyed it. There will indeed be more, I’m already gearing up for the next book, which I aim to be starting in about a month.

Jeff: That’s great. Killing Ground was a book I started with the intention of doing something that would be unexpected and I’m glad you liked it (see the above post ☺) And who indeed says Space Marines are boring? I have a seven-foot tall, genetically engineered killing machine that would like a word…

Gav: Of course, I forgot the scented incense and the chant of awakening. I could have used your help when it came to invoking the spirit of the Omnissiah. Perhaps we should discuss ways of placating the now slumbering Machine Spirit over a pint soon.

Xhalax (2): At the moment, I don’t know of any signings for Mechanicum in London, but it would surprise me if we didn’t get something arranged. Stay tuned here and the BL site and I’ll make sure you’re the first to know of any such events. And I have a restraing order all ready to be signed should you turn up looking crazed (well, more crazed ☺).

Gix: The image on the original cover of Storm of Iron wasn’t drawn as anyone in particular, as it was done before I really got started on the book, but once I saw it, I knew he was a character just waiting to happen. Thus was born Forrix and if you see me in person, ask me how he got his name… As to Honsou, yeah, I think of him as dark haired, though he’s been through a fair bit in his time in print and he’s changed quite a bit since that description was written. He now has Pasanius’s arm, a bionic eye, a heavily scarred face and a daemon axe. I’ve never seen that picture before and know nothing of what Prophecy’s Peril is (anyone…?) so I’ll stick with my picture of what he looks like.

Sam and Xhalax (3): Your replies teaches me I should read other people’s responses before writing my own…

On the Reading Stand: Irvine Welsh’s new novel, Crime, which I was lucky enough to have signed by the great man in Bristol the other week. A priceless moment was listening to him do a reading of a coke-fuelled night in from the book in a busy bookstore and watching the staff cringe at some of the language as tutting pensioners and parents went by. But, honestly, what did they expect from an Irvine Welsh reading…

On the Hi-Fi: A mix these days, but I recently bought The Moldy Peaches CD, after hearing it played in the tea shop I sometimes work in. Great, lo-fi sound, some fantastic lyrics and a real sense of fun to it. Go get it now!

And with that, I’ll sign off. I’m off to get the bus to the airport to fly to Scotland for a week. With Mechanicum behind me, I’m off north for a change of scenery, a weekend away with the lads and to work on a new comic strip for Boom! I’ll leave you with links to a few of the covers for my first strip for Boom! and the cover of my first Starcraft novel: I, Mengsk. The cover was done by my good friend and all round top artist chap, Mark Gibbons. Hope you like them.

http://www.boom-studios.net/warhammer-40-000-fire-amp-honor-1-cover-a.html

http://www.boom-studios.net/warhammer-40-000-fire-amp-honor-1-cover-b.html

Talk to you when I get back from Scotland.

Cheers,

Graham

7/24/2008 4:44:05 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)  #    Comments [10]Trackback
7/24/2008 8:03:38 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)
If find that I just give up altogether on aruging a point over why I liked/didn't like something that other people (be they the majority....which is usually is, or the individual) decided that I'm wrong because I'm not 'going with the flow' because usually there's no talking/discussing/explaining with them.....it just descends into an argument which goes nowhere and it pretty stupid. There's no room for compromise.

Though I have to admit, I have been guilty of pooh-poohing other people's ideas and interpretations of books because it differs from my own, but it's usually while discussion aspects of the book, such as characterisation or writing style or further background rather than niggly little things such as if the book lived up to expecation.

My expectations of books and pretty much anything like fiction is merely to be entertained by it, even a small amount, and if it succeeds in doing that, then I think its good.....if it blows me away....then I'll rave about it forever more.

Anyhoo.....enough of why I don't use forums anymore.

And it's all well and good telling me to read The Killing Ground, Mr. McNeill.....but I think my boss would have issues with me standing about reading when I should be working. And since I've yet to con someone I know into buying it so I can pinch it off them to read....I'm stuck for the simple reason being....my books won't maaaaaaaatch!

*whines*

Plus I changed the cabinets around so that the book is facing the other way and not in my direct line of sight.

Though in truth, if i focused on all the stuff I have still to read and all the stuff I have still to do (things need to be written, drawings need to be finished, Thousand Sons need to be painted, sheep need to be sewn together and new ones knitted, games need to be played and films need to be watched).....the paperback copy would be here in no time.

But as it is, I'm currently entrenched with Mr. Counter (just finished Battle for the Abyss and will go back and finish Daemon World)....then it'll be Mr. Long, Mr. Scanlon, Mr. Savile....and things all over the place....I've still not read Planet Kill and I got it when it came out....guess I really should read that next, if only just the Honsou story and come back to the rest.

And hell yes! More unabridged audio BLness!

Since I have a terrible habit of not being able to read while stationary (don't ask)....so many things go unread because I don't have time to travel EVERYWHERE and I'm tired in the morning.....it'd be great to be able to listen to stuff while I'm busy and absorb it that way.

And as for the craziness....I've yet to develop a nervous tick so the only sign of my madness is the odd glint I get in my eye.

Muahahahahahahahahahahaha!
7/24/2008 9:36:12 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)
Hi mate ! Glad you got around finishing Mechanicum and you're pleased with the result. It should end on my translation lectern within the year.
Enjoy your "time off". The cover for I, Mengsk looks ace.
7/25/2008 8:38:14 AM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)
Hey buddy,

Congrats on finishing off Mechanicum, hope you had a bottle of red waiting for when you typed 'the end.'

Ant
Ant
7/25/2008 6:51:09 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)
Hahahaha...Pathfinder. Ironically, I started off my expectation on THAT film as a tale of Chaos Warriors and Marauders from Norsca converging on a "lost tribe of man" in The New World.

In THAT light, it works nicely.

I think a lot of the internet machismo is due to anonymity. People say things online they would never say to a person's face and have far more courage to speak openly and out loud (and be cross with people) simply because they can do it and get away with it.

Part of that is perceived power. Powerless in a dayjob they hate, with a nagging wife waiting to chastise them over forgetting to take out the garbage bin...so lets kick the dog (or in this case, be all aggressive to complete strangers).

Part of the problem is the other side of the coin: a politically correct world. Part of me wishes we could all speak in a forthright manner, speak our minds (respectfully of course) and have it out with people we disagree with, then have a chuck on the shoulder and a beer afterwards.

I think the vast majority of folks fall in the middle ground and simply don't feel the need to deal with trolls and rather walk away from a conflict over what is really a moot point.

"Who is more the fool? The troll or the one arguing with him?"

So where is the culprit?
IMO it's human weakness and cowardice (in trolls) combined with overwhelming societal niceties and the result is 40k Forum Trolls. (Not that 40k has the corner on the market TBH)
;)

I'm glad you liked my bit on "Perspectives". It's usually a winner at parties and online rants. ;)

Very best wishes.
Cheers!

JP

JP

7/30/2008 10:26:51 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)
Urk!

I realised how much I need to sit and reread Dead Sky Black Sun today.

Started reading the Honsou short in PlanetKill and thinking 'Hang on a minute....I thought he was dead!' on more than one occasion.

Not impressed, and starting to feel like I've reached my 40K limit....that I can't cram anything new into my head because it pushes out the older stuff.
8/8/2008 12:04:20 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)
firstly, congratulations on finishing the Mechanicum draft! can't wait for it to come out to the public (and there's 'Killing ground' still to be read, so yay for more good stuff :))

i'd like, however, to ask a question related to the older material, namely, 'Fulgrim'. recently we've been having a discussion with a fellow WH40K fan as to the symbolism/origin of the title 'Phoenician'. the point of the debate is if there's an implied pun/relation with the purple color the historical Phoenicians were famed for (which is also quite similar to the colour scheme of the Emperor's Children legion). we got too deep into the obscure etymological routes that connect the ancient Phoenicia with the mythical Phoenix (also sharing the same colours) and can't reach any conclusion. help?

also there's this apparent similarity between the Horus Heresy storyline in general and Milton's 'Paradise Lost'. was this book really of influence? speaking about 'Fulgrim' again, the name of Chemos seems important.

thank you in advance, and sorry to bother you with such bookworm-ish details!
8/9/2008 6:55:51 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)
"Fulgrim and his Legion had risen, phoenix-like, from the disaster with greater resolve and strength. In the process Fulgrim had earned the affectionate sobriquet of ”the Phoenician”."
Is not it?
8/11/2008 6:38:50 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)
Just finished reading the Honsou story in Planet Kill....and I have to say that the ending made me really sad....though I suspect what happened in the short will have greater ramifications on things yet to come.

But still......Damn you Mr. McNeill.

*shakes her fist*
8/14/2008 7:38:34 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)
Mark Gibbons? Any relation to Dave Gibbons (the guy who drew Watchmen)?

Other than that, I'm really looking forward to Mechanium, Graham! I remember being blown away by the descriptions of the Mechanicus in Ben Counter's novel Dark Mechanicus, and I'm eager to see more background on the adepts of the Machine-God exposed.

@Hadeswench: I agree, the Horus Heresy is Paradise Lost through and through. Re: Horus being one of the Emperor/God's greatest servants, just like Lucifer; a rebellion erupting over the Space Marines/angels being upset over regular humanity inheriting their empire; the climactic battle in the end, and the traitors being expelled to the Eye of Terror/Hell.

I think a famous author once said that "there are no original stories: every story has already been told. There are just original retellings of stories." While I feel this is true of the Horus Heresy, I also feel that the HH is a downright excellent transformation of Paradise Lost (though I'm sure it wasn't intended that way in its entirety)
8/19/2008 10:09:30 PM (GMT Daylight Time, UTC+01:00)
@Lord of Nonsensical Crap: "I also feel that the HH is a downright excellent transformation of Paradise Lost"
-- well, that contributes to the epic feel of the HH, doesn't it? ;) i find that a part of the enjoyment this series gives me comes from the possibility of recognising the many, many references embedded there. it gives the story extra-depth (and a chance for the reader to feel clever, hehe).
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